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Beauty knows no better ugliness
than the overuse thereof,
for the essence of beauty is negligence
and the merest thought of
the beautiful should always
be of mind.

                 The ugly too often
think themselves beautiful;
but these are the ones, then,
who never fall in beauty,
apart from the surface.

                                  Yet
we must look at them
their outward shells our weakness.

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This particular one was actually another attempt at playing with a certain style I personally knew little about. Trying to break up a poem into stanzas while spacing it as if none existed turned out a little too difficult for me. I've not tried this style since.

(Also not certain the spacing will work here... we'll see.)

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~timethian Aug 24, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
*grins* I happen to like this one too, although I've never really been happy about the verbal imagery. Sometimes I think I get too preachy in my poetic speech. ;)
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~kiwihobbit Aug 24, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like this piece. It makes me think about what you're saying because it's so creatively expressed.
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